Here’s a little-known fact about me - I absolutely HATED writing when I was in school. But surprise surprise, I am doing all the writing on my blog and social media now. Funny how life turned out. 😂😂😂
And it’s the turn of my boys now… because just how on earth does one teach essay writing, especially to secondary school kids??? All the different types of essay questions from argumentative, narrative, descriptive to even discursive (I had to google that last one), I struggle to even come up with topic-related essay ideas, let alone guide them on how to write a good essay!
So thank goodness for Prune.sg, which is an AI-powered essay writing platform for secondary school students. With Prune, both Ash & Ayd get guided practice and develop their ability to tackle a range of composition types. First, Prune helps them to analyse composition questions with its AI-powered brainstorming tools to avoid going off-topic. Then it helps them to develop creative ideas quickly to maximise writing time during exams. Finally - and that’s the most helpful tool for me as a parent - Prune helps to mark the essay too!!! They get immediate feedback on grammar, vocabulary, and style when they submit their compositions. Wah solid, I like.
You can zoom in on the photo to see Ash’s attempt at one of the essay questions. Yes, I could have just used a photo of Ash & Ayd staring aimlessly at a screen, which will be more IG-worthy. LOL. But I really wanted to show you that Ash really attempted to write an essay based on that and the result was he loved it. He liked how Prune broke down the various parts of the essay into different points by guiding him write down his views in a systematic manner, which really simplified the thought process.
There are tons of online learning tools and portals for pre-school and primary school kids these days but for secondary school kids? Not so many. Which is why I think Prune is truly a fantastic helpline for this group of teens. But don’t take my word for it - sign up and try it out for FREE for one whole month at www.prune.sg/register with my code: CMPRUNEL. No strings attached. 😊
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同時也有1部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過4萬的網紅ZeemUzma,也在其Youtube影片中提到,Miss Peregrine's Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children by Ransom Riggs บ้านหลอนเด็กประหลาด โดย แรมซัม ริกส์ I had to finish this series before ...
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descriptive writing 在 男孩媽媽的育兒手記 Facebook 的最佳貼文
正仔上次的英文作文題目是 My Dream House,學習 descriptive writing 的寫作。我見到他在 pre-writing 的工作紙畫了一個 cupboard 但刻意 label 了它是 cueboard,我最初以為個 p 寫得差似 e,後來他強調這是 CUEBOARD!「你創作這個字㗎?」「係呀。」「咩意思呀?點解咁做呀?」他笑而不語。
我心想,無緣故將 cupboard 改做 cueboard,老師一定以為他串錯字吧!
作文是課堂進行的。今天收到他的大作。原文是:There is a game room in my house. There is a bed (I sleep there) and a cueboard. (Does it sound similar to a game ? The answer is upside down.) 然後工作紙的尾端有兩個倒轉的字(見圖一)。原來他的意思是 cueboard 即是 Qbert(這個我剛 google 是甚麼東西),這個在 game room 似 cupboard 的 cueboard,也是遊戲 Qbert,這樣子玩「食字」玩諧音,媽媽也給考起。我今天看到倒轉的答案才恍然大悟。
descriptive writing 在 雙娜新樂園 Facebook 的最佳解答
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📝公文式自主練習📝
超超超超超久沒紀錄閱讀了
最近在家過著規律的生活
之前媽媽買的練習本開始派上用場了😆
🕒時間規劃
早上:國語、英語
晚上:數學、邏輯
🔔課程內容:
1️⃣國語部份先練習注音拼音
📕翰林《暑假國語研習營升小一》
大娜注音拼音很少練習
看注音超吃力
尤其是聲調部份
常常念錯
練習這本書反而花了很多時間
📕康軒《閱讀易上手1》
文字部份大娜反而能自己閱讀
從閱讀測驗和小孩一起看文章的脈絡與重點
讓孩子可以慢慢掌握自主閱讀的方法
對未來讀橋樑書很有幫助
📌很推康軒《閱讀易上手》
👉文章選得很好
👉成語有解釋與例句
👉測驗題很有水準
📕南一《閱讀小行家1》
前半部大多是小孩習慣的童謠
小孩寫起來很熟悉
但後半部的文章選得有點%#&¥
題目也過於簡單
總之我不是很喜歡這個版本
但我也買了《閱讀小行家2》
只好硬著頭皮繼續寫🤣
2️⃣英文閱讀
📕Reading for comprehension
這系列由易到難共有11本
很適合讓已適字的孩子練習英文閱讀
👉全彩印刷+有趣的題目
👉文章思考訓練
✔️reading detail
✔️using context clues
✔️recalling details
✔️identitying cause and effect relationships
✔️making valid inferences
✔️drawing conclusions
從簡潔易懂訓練英文閱讀基本技巧
測驗題都是5題選擇題+1題expository writing 或descriptive writing
小孩一天寫2-3篇慢慢累積實力🎀
3️⃣數學練習
📕南一《精熟計算1年級》
👉從題型練習基本概念
✔️運算:分合、加減(至2位數)
✔️分類:形狀、大小、顏色、物品
✔️位置:上下、前後、左右、遠近
✔️比較:長短、高矮、厚薄
✔️日期與時間
✔️數量統計
4️⃣邏輯思考
AMIQ +魔數邏輯王
👉手腦並用訓練邏輯推理
👉數字運算與分類有助於解題速度
#5y1m practice at home
descriptive writing 在 ZeemUzma Youtube 的最佳貼文
Miss Peregrine's Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children by Ransom Riggs
บ้านหลอนเด็กประหลาด โดย แรมซัม ริกส์
I had to finish this series before the movie comes out at the end of September! Here is a review video for the first book of the series. Overall, I think it is a great book with lots of interesting characters and and a very descriptive writing style. My favorite thing about this book has to be the vintage photographs. They help make this whole journey a wonderful reading experience!
Question of the day!!!!!
"If you found out that you are one of those peculiar children, what would be your peculiarity?"
- I am a pretty good speaker/ influencer and many people have told me that I have a nice voice, so I would say that my peculiarity would probably have something to do with voice and power. Maybe I can persuade others really well? No one can disobey or ignore my request or I can hypnotize people with my words? LOLOL
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