今晚的筆譯學習專欄,一起穿梭時空
來讀 #美國自由詩之父 平易近人的文字
搭配 Sonny老師的翻譯&教學札記 老師的情境翻譯服用
記得和我分享,哪句帶給你的感受最深?
以下為 Sonny 老師第一視角文字
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你上次讀英文詩是什麼時候呢?
學英文卻不讀英文詩,是很可惜的事
許多同學一聽到「詩」
第一印象就是晦澀難懂,因而敬而遠之
但其實在英文詩的世界裡
平易近人的作品並不少
著名詩人如艾蜜莉・狄金森(Emily Dickinson)
或葉慈(W. B. Yeats)的多數作品
使用的單字都不會太難
推薦給 #想讀英詩學英文 的朋友
在閱讀英文詩的過程中
我們可以特別注意三個重點:
1. 字詞的挑選和運用
2. 字義和音律的結合(sound and sense)
3. 摹寫技巧和畫面感的建立
今天想和大家分享
「美國自由詩之父」惠特曼
(Walt Whitman)的一首詩
惠特曼早年家貧
念完小學即輟學打工貼補家用
對社會現實及人情冷暖觀察入微
他的寫實段落真摯、文字精準而自然
以下是我非常喜歡的作品
A Glimpse(驚鴻一瞥)
和我的中文翻譯:
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A glimpse through an interstice caught,
我穿過隙縫驚鴻一瞥
Of a crowd of workmen and drivers in a bar-room around the stove late of a winter night, and I unremark’d seated in a corner,
瞥見工人車伕攢聚酒吧小間
圍著爐火在暮冬夜裡
我坐在角落一言不發
Of a youth who loves me and whom I love, silently approaching and seating himself near, that he may hold me by the hand,
瞥見那傾慕我我也傾慕的少年
默默走近,在我身畔坐了下來
也許他會牽起我的手
A long while amid the noises of coming and going, of drinking and oath and smutty jest,
許久,在人來人往的鼎沸
酒杯鏗鏘的嬉鬧和誑言中
There we two, content, happy in being together, speaking little, perhaps not a word.
我倆因著彼此而歡欣
忘了隻字片語
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整首詩從穿過隙縫的一個眼神展開
從無到有建構出酒吧裡的人群、聲音、影像
你是否能透過輕巧自然的文字
感受到酒吧的嘈雜聲中
一種心照不宣的浪漫呢?
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今年最後一期【台灣浩進階筆譯班】
結合往年爆滿的 #翻譯所考試班 + #基礎筆譯班
全新 10 週課綱,帶你完勝不同語境
旁聽班名額,只剩個位數 🔥
錯過等明年啦:https://lihi1.cc/Fdayv
同時也有16部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過38萬的網紅CH Music Channel,也在其Youtube影片中提到,《魔道祖師 - 羨雲編》 cold rain 作詞 / Lyricist:aimerrhythm 作曲 / Composer:三橋隆幸 編曲 / Arranger:玉井健二、 百田留衣 歌 / Singer:Aimer 翻譯:澄野(CH Music Channel) 意譯:CH(CH Music C...
hand hold中文 在 國際狗語日報 X 百靈果News Facebook 的最讚貼文
剛剛運動的時候邊聽BBC Podcast,突然聽到台灣公司買疫苗的關鍵字,沒想到仔細一聽報導差點沒吐血。BBC竟然報導台灣政府為了"保住顏面","不願意"購買BNT疫苗。但卻隻字不提台灣所面臨來自中國的巨大外交及軍事威脅。
BBC News 中文(繁體)這麼偏頗可以嗎?
如果要報導中台關係 與其武斷下結論 希望這位記者有機會來台灣了解
BBC News, Taiwan is facing serious military and diplomatic threats from the Chinese government. How can you jump to the conclusion that the government is “RELUCTANT to purchase vaccines” in order to “SAVE FACE”. Isn't your report too biased?
影片是兩個片段合在一起
--以下為原文逐字稿--
Two Taiwnese firms have taken matters into their own hands to buy a large consignment of Pfizer Biontech Covid jabs after the government was reluctant to purchase the medicine because it’s being distributed by a company based in mainland China.
Asia Pacific editor Michael: “Taiwan and China are currently locked in this bitter diplomatic dispute over the future status of Taiwan. China wants it to be part of China. Taiwan thinks it should be independent. That’s the background. So in Taiwan over recent months there’s been a surge of Covid cases, and the Taiwanese government has been desperate to get hold of vaccines. It got AZ, got Moderna. It hasn’t been able to get the Pfizer Biontech. That’s because in that region, in East Asia, it’s been distributed by a Chinese company. Taiwanese government was unwilling because of those reasons I just mentioned to deal directly with a Chinese company. So what’s happened is these two Taiwanese firms stepped in: they bought 10 million doses of Pfizer Biontech vaccines from this Chinese company and they are going to hand it over to Taiwan. They spent 350 million dollars. In effect, these companies have acted as intermediate just so that the Taiwanese government can save face not to deal directly with this Chinese company.
hand hold中文 在 Chichi的關於韓國 Facebook 的最佳解答
🤨你別再裝傻啦!韓文怎麼說?
🎤#關於歌詞中的韓文
🥰IU- Hold my hand (내 손을 잡아)
查了一下發現有兩首歌都有用到這個片語
你們一定都有聽過!快來看看ㄅ🎵
▶️IU - 내 손을 잡아
네 맘을 말해봐 딴청 피우지 말란 말이야
說出你的心意吧 不要再裝傻了
네 맘 가는 그대로 지금 내 손을 잡아
現在就按照你心裡想的 牽起我的手吧
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iM_06QeZi8
▶️另外一首是 소유 X 정기고 - SOME썸
니 맘 속에 날 놔두고 한 눈 팔지 마
把我放在你心裡 就專心看著我一個人
너야말로 다 알면서 딴청 피우지 마
你才是明明都知道就不要裝傻了
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-FhDScM_2w
在字典上딴청是解釋為做跟某件事情無關的行動,中文就翻譯成裝傻、裝不知道哩!
這首竟然是IU十九歲時的創作曲❗️❓真的是天才ㄚ✨TMI今天等公車的時候邊聽邊唱特別開嗓🎤😌你們有推薦其他開嗓歌ㄇ🤗有時候一整天說沒幾句話KEY都好低🥲
hand hold中文 在 CH Music Channel Youtube 的最讚貼文
《魔道祖師 - 羨雲編》
cold rain
作詞 / Lyricist:aimerrhythm
作曲 / Composer:三橋隆幸
編曲 / Arranger:玉井健二、 百田留衣
歌 / Singer:Aimer
翻譯:澄野(CH Music Channel)
意譯:CH(CH Music Channel)
English Translation: CH(CH Music Channel)
背景 / Background - from the official MV:
https://i.imgur.com/9h47eUR.png
上傳你的字幕吧!/ Submit your subtitles here!
https://forms.gle/MSsAM2WHpT31UuUh8
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Copyright Info:
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Please support the original creator.
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粉絲團隨時獲得最新訊息!
Check my Facebook page for more information!
https://www.facebook.com/chschannel/
中文翻譯 / Chinese Translation :
https://home.gamer.com.tw/creationDetail.php?sn=5143557
日文歌詞 / Japanese Lyrics :
When cold rain's falling from the sky
Will you stay by my side?
止まない雨に打たれ あなたは哭いていた
冷たいだけの詩に その瞳を逸らして
淡い夢に身を任せ 傍にいたかった
隠せない面影を手繰り寄せて 今 世界の隅で
Can you hear me now?
I'm here, alone 深く刺すほどに強くなれと願う
Hold my hand ただ描いたのは それぞれの道を選べる時
消えない炎の中で 季節は揺れていた
陽だまりに身を寄せた 春は過ぎ去って
深い夜の帳に堕ちる露が ただ白く煙る
And I'll figure out
なぜ 不確かな物ばかり 強く胸を焦がす
Cold rain まだ 拭えない正しさを 洗い流して If you're here…
Can you hear me now?
I'm here, alone 遠く雷鳴が強くなれと叫ぶ
Cold rain 今 白い雨が一輪の花を咲かせる時
花を咲かせるとき
中文歌詞 / Chinese Lyrics :
遙遙天穹篩落冷冽雨
你是否能伴我身?
淋打著不止歇的夏雨,與淚水一同流落你的臉龐
你別過眼神,僅望向冷若冰霜的詩詞
妥身予朦朧幻夢,僅渴望你待我身旁
試圖在現處的世界一隅,憶起、追循,毫無掩飾的真摯神情
你能否聽見我的呼喊?
佇此,哪怕孤身一人,內心仍深切地渴望能夠更堅強
請你緊握我的手,但為此所描繪的是,彼此能夠選擇各自道路前行之時
永不熄滅的焰火之中,季節悄悄搖曳更迭
置身於烈陽之下,意覺春意闌珊
深夜帷幕之中降下的雨露,僅成縷縷白漫雲煙,飄散
我將持續探尋
為何,不確實的種種,使此心焦灼難安
只要你伴我身旁,哪怕是難以抹滅的正確,也任由冷冽的夏雨肆意洗刷一切
你能聽見我的聲音嗎?
我在這啊,即使形單影隻,響徹遠方的雷鳴卻彷彿正呼喊著堅強
冷冽的白雨,如今,正靜待著止歇,使花朵綻開時
待雨後繁花錦簇時
英文歌詞 / English Lyrics :
When cold rain's falling from the sky
Will you stay by my side?
Drenched by the unceasing rain, you were crying.
Looking away from the cold poem.
I gave myself to a faint dream, hoping you to stay by my side.
I'm hauling the expression that can't hide now, in the corner of the world.
Can you hear me now?
I'm here, alone. The deeper you stab, the more I hope to be stronger.
Hold my hand. The only thing I drew is nothing but the time when we can choose our own way.
Within the unstoppable flame, seasons were swaying.
The spring that depending on the sun has passed.
The dew that falls from the curtain of the deep night sky, looks nothing but misty white.
And I'll figure out.
The reason why these uncertain things strongly burn my heart.
Cold rain. Please rinse away the truth and correctness that still can't be wiped. If you're here…
Can you hear me now?
I'm here, alone. The distant thunder is roaring as if asking me to be stronger.
Cold rain, is now waiting for the time that the white rain to bloom the flower.
Waiting for the time flowers bloom.
hand hold中文 在 CH Music Channel Youtube 的最讚貼文
《Walpurgis》
ever after / 從今以後,永不分離
作詞 / Lyricist:aimerrhythm
作曲 / Composer:百田留衣、玉井健二
編曲 / Arranger:玉井健二、 釣俊輔
歌 / Singer:Aimer
翻譯:澄野(CH Music Channel)
意譯:CH(CH Music Channel)
English Translation: CH(CH Music Channel)
背景 / Background - 曇のち - 荻pote:
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/84907990
上傳你的字幕吧!/ Submit your subtitles here!
https://forms.gle/MSsAM2WHpT31UuUh8
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Copyright Info:
Be aware this channel is for promotion purposes only without any illegal profit. All music's ownership belongs to the original creators.
Please support the original creator.
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如果你喜歡我的影片,不妨按下喜歡和訂閱,你的支持就是我創作的最大原動力!
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粉絲團隨時獲得最新訊息!
Check my Facebook page for more information!
https://www.facebook.com/chschannel/
中文翻譯 / Chinese Translation :
https://home.gamer.com.tw/creationDetail.php?sn=5130288
日文歌詞 / Japanese Lyrics :
あと少しでいいから ここにいて
それくらい いいでしょ? 気づいてよ
振り返るたび いつもまぶしくて
あなたの笑顔が よく見えない
かけがえのない時間(とき) これからもずっと
続いていけるような
ありふれた願い抱えた手を
零さないように 重ねて
ただ笑ってたくて そばにいて欲しくて
誰よりもその心に触れたくて
あなたの優しい声 聴かせて欲しいんだよ
目を閉じてほら 消えないように包みこんでいて欲しいんだよ
無理しなくていいから 窓開けて
ひとりにしないから はなしてよ
握り返せないほど 凍えた
指先をそっと とかすように
当たり前の奇跡 忘れてしまうほど
満たされてる日々を
白みゆく夜を見送るたび
想いだしていたいよ 何度も
ただ笑ってたくて そばにいて欲しくて
探してしまう 心に触れたくて
吐息をたしかめて ぬくもり分け合って
それだけでいい この手を離さないでいて いつまでも
擦り切れそうな言葉とか 剥き出しのままの欠片に
その瞳(め)が滲んでも ここに ここにいるよ ずっと
ただ笑ってたくて そばにいて欲しくて
誰よりもその心に触れたくて
あなたの優しい声 聴かせて欲しいんだよ
目を閉じてほら 消えないように包みこんでいて欲しいんだよ
中文歌詞 / Chinese Lyrics :
即使是短暫的片刻也好,陪在我身邊吧
只是任性一下並不過分吧?快察覺呀
回首看見的一切總是如此絢麗耀眼
燦爛得令我無法看清你的笑容
彷彿這段最珍貴的時光與點滴
從今以後仍能持續
為了不讓滿溢的願望自手中遺落
兩人彼此雙手相疊,十指緊扣
只願能與你相笑、願你能與我相伴
比任何人還更渴望知悉你的心意
我只想聽聽你那溫柔的聲音
我只希望在我閉上眼之後,你仍能緊抱著我,不再放手
可以不用再勉強了,打開窗戶吧
我不會再讓你感到孤獨了,敞開心扉吧
如靜靜地融化你那——
冰冷至無法握緊的雙手與指尖般
早已快遺忘,猶如理所當然般的奇蹟
每度過一天充實的時間
每見證一次漸明的夜晚
不論多少次,我都想憶起,那份彼此相遇的奇蹟
只願能與你相笑、願你能與我相伴
渴望知悉你的心意而不禁起身探尋
配合彼此的呼吸、分享兩人的溫暖
我不多奢求,僅渴望不放開繫起的雙手,永遠不放開
漸漸磨損消逝的話語,與剝落顯現出的片刻點滴
即使那雙眸已因此濕潤朦朧,但我在這、我就在這呀,永不離去
只願能與你相笑、願你能與我相伴
比任何人還更渴望知悉你的所有一切
我只想再聽聽你那溫柔的聲音
我只希望在我閉上眼之後,你仍能緊抱著我,不再放手
英文歌詞 / English Lyrics :
A little bit is enough, please stay by my side.
It's not too much and wilful, right? Just notice me!
Turning around, your smile is dazzling.
So bright that I can't see you well.
From now on, those irreplaceable times will definitely,
Last forever after.
Putting our hands together, so that these ordinary desires wouldn't slip through and spill out.
I just want to smile with you, wanting to stay by your side.
I want to know all your heart more than everyone else.
I want to hear your gentle voice.
I want you to hold me tightly so that everything won't disappear while I close my eyes.
No need to force yourself, just open the windows.
You're not alone, just share your feelings with me.
As if I gently melting your frozen fingers that can't be grasped.
My days are so satisfying that I've completely forgotten the miracle I took for granted.
Every time I see the dawn illuminates the night,
I want to remember it, more and more.
I just want to smile with you, wanting to stay by your side.
I want to search for your heart.
Checking our breaths, sharing our warmth.
Those are good enough. I just want you to hold my hand tightly so that we won't let go forever ever after.
Frayed words and unconcealed pieces,
are making those eyes blurred in tears.
Hey, I'm here, always be here for you, forever ever after.
I just want to smile with you, wanting to stay by your side.
I want to know all your heart more than everyone else.
I want to hear your gentle voice.
I want you to hold me tightly so that everything won't disappear while I close my eyes.
hand hold中文 在 AnJet Cat Youtube 的最佳貼文
中文歌詞 (根據官方原譯校正):
來吧, 我的一眾男孩女孩們
我們將一同闖蕩虛空
別過母親的雙手, 踏上旅程
我們向著旭日啟航
直至船歸遠方
我們將一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於深處的姊妹們呀
我們正航向無風之地
是呀, 我們都將被拉入深淵
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於寒凜深處
我們的航船
只屬強悍與敏捷之士
我們速速卸貨並繼續路途
要為了生計而奔馳
否則下場生不如死
當你沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於深處的姊妹們呀
我們正航向無風之地
是呀, 我們都將被拉入深淵
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於寒凜深處
據說有一位高高在上的男人
他的眼神彷若惡魔化身
還擁有著一隻黃金手
他能傷害你, 亦能擁抱你
他能踢開你, 也能撫慰你
當你沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於深處的姊妹們呀
我們正航向無風之地
是呀, 我們都將被拉入深淵
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於寒凜深處
噢, 如此聰慧真誠的姊妹們呀
當我氣數將盡之時
妳是否會讓我躺在
Granum冠幣堆上
好讓我沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於深處的姊妹們呀
我們正航向無風之地
是呀, 我們都將被拉入深淵
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於深處的姊妹們呀
我們正航向無風之地
是呀, 我們都將被拉入深淵
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
一同沉睡於寒凜深處
沉睡於寒凜深處
英文歌詞:
So it's into the Void
Now me girls and me boys
From Mother's hands we go
We'll be be sailing to the sun
Till the voyage is done
Then we'll be sleeping in the cold below
Sisters! Below, below
We're going where the winds don't blow
Yes we're all bound down
To the deep and we'll be
Sleeping in the cold below, below
Sleeping in the cold below
Our sailing ship
Is for the hard and the quick
We roll our load and go
There's a living to be made
Or there's Hell to pay
When you're sleeping in the cold below
Sisters! Below, below
We're going where the winds don't blow
Yes we're all bound down
To the deep and we'll be
Sleeping in the cold below, below
Sleeping in the cold below
There's a man on high
With the Devil in his eye
And a golden hand, I'm told
It can hurt you, it can hold you
He can kick you or console you
When you're sleeping in the cold below
Sisters! Below, below
We're going where the winds don't blow
Yes we're all bound down
To the deep and we'll be
Sleeping in the cold below, below
Sleeping in the cold below
Oh Sisters you
So wise and true
When it's my time to go
Won't you lay me down
Under Granum Crowns
And I'll be sleeping in the cold below
Sisters! Below, below
We're going where the winds don't blow
Yes we're all bound down
To the deep and we'll be
Sleeping in the cold below, below
Sleeping in the cold below
Today we sail
On the Solar Rail
For there's much we just don't know
So farewell with a kiss
Then it's fast for the mist
Till we're sleeping in the cold below
詞/曲: Keith Power, Alan Doyle, Digital Extremes
歌手: Damhnait Doyle
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