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《 移民澳洲這件事 | 為什麼我們會從75分變70分》

📣文長慎入📣
給有心想申請移民的你們，這篇雖然很文長，但請你們一定要認真看完，文末有對我們成功在8個月內移民幫助很大的資訊大分享，千萬不要錯過！
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在開始今天的主題之前，要先跟你們大概解釋技術移民189簽證跟190簽證的差別在哪？

189簽證👉🏻申請者可以居住在澳洲的任何一個州屬，不會受到任何限制
190簽證👉🏻申請者必須在被擔保的州屬居住和工作至少兩年，兩年之後才能移居去其他地區定居

以上兩種簽證如果申請成功，都可以一步到位成為澳洲永久居民(PR)
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其實我們一直都想要以我們的專業去申請189簽證，因為我們不想被限制居住的地方，我們只想要回到我們熟悉的Brisbane，畢竟在brisbane住了五年多，即使回到這裡也不會有一切都必須從新開始的不安定感。

如果申請190簽證，我們就只能住在墨爾本或是雪梨，這兩個地方雖然很美，但我們知道如果去了，那真的是很有壓力，因為對那邊的一切都非常不熟悉，可是礙於我們非常需要州擔保的那5分，我們也只好認命放棄申請189簽證。

所以代辦幫我們申請了190簽證(偏遠地區州擔保+5分)，遞出的州屬為新南威爾斯州(NSW)跟維多利亞州(VIC)。

(📣注意：申請190州擔保時，各州開出的需要職業清單各有不同，所以要確保你們要申請的專業是有在申請州屬的職業清單裡，才有辦法申請190簽證)

最後我們就是以70分基本分+5分州擔保的分數，在2018/08/01向澳洲政府遞出EOI。

基本上遞出EOI之後能做的事就是等等等，不斷的等，雲爸每天都在上論壇，跟上澳洲政府官網，查看最新的移民相關動態，每一天的等待都是煎熬。

在2018/08/30，8月份官方邀請數據公布了，雲爸看到他的專業分數從7月份邀請數據的75分下調到了70分，而當時雲爸其實對這一切都還不是很了解，就上了論壇請教大家，得知的結果是，雲爸的專業基本分數70分就可以符合189被邀請的資格！！！！！！！

這就表示，我們即使不需要州擔保的那5分，我們也可以以我們原有的基本70分去申請189簽證，而且拿到簽證的機會很大，因為以官方邀請數據上所提供的資料來看，當時拿著70分的189簽證申請者（這裡說的是雲爸的專業）已經邀請被邀請到DOE(Date Of Effect - 也就是EOI的生效日期) 2017/09/27的人了。

雲爸立刻打電話給代辦，告訴他們這個消息，而且請他們火速幫我們在原先的EOI上面，多加了189簽證的申請。

就這樣我們最後就是以70分的分數，在2018/08/30那天向澳洲政府再次遞出189簽證的申請。

最後，我們的EOI上面就有
190簽證👉🏻新南威爾斯州(NSW)跟維多利亞州(VIC)
189簽證👉🏻居住任何地方都可以

就看最後是州政府先邀請我們，還是澳洲政府直接邀請我們，才知道最後會是哪一個簽證。
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這就是為什麼我們的分數從75分變成70分的原因，真的好險老天爺保祐，讓雲爸有一個經常處於熱鍋上螞蟻的性格才會發現這件事，不然我們現在真的還是傻傻的在等著190的州擔保。

說真的，回想這段8個月的等待時間，我們一直以為州擔保有75分，被邀請的機率會大一點，代辦也是以同樣的心態告訴我們，州擔保會容易一點，但是，完全不是這樣！因為每個州的州擔保限制要求更多，而且透過論壇我們才知道，原來州政府的動作像烏龜一樣慢，除非你分數真的異於常人的高，或是符合了超高的英文水平，加上剛好是他們非常需要的專業，那你就可能很快的被邀請，不然的話真的只能慢慢等。

這篇其實我最主要想要表達的事，我知道既然花錢請了代辦，那當然就是全權交給他們去處理，但你們自己本身一定要對這方面資訊有一定程度的了解，還必須要無時無刻的更新現在移民的資訊，這真的很重要，而不是付了錢就沒自己的事喔。

就像，今天如果雲爸沒有常常上相關網站跟論壇追蹤現在的移民趨勢的話，我們根本不會知道其實我們的分數根本就可以申請189簽證，而我們的代辦也不知道原來我們的專業其實最低邀請分數原來已經下修到70分，是我們自己發現的。

所以說，今天我們有辦法回到我們最熟悉的Brisbane，最大的功臣其實是雲爸！如果沒有發現的話，我們今天還是傻傻的在等190簽證，一個似乎永遠都等不到的州擔保。

這些資訊代辦是不會去幫你們追蹤的（因為他們手上有很多客戶，根本不會記得你的分數或專業），所以說，我發自內心的要告訴想申請的人，或是已經遞出申請的人，平常真的要花點時間好好的看看現在的移民趨勢，每天早上花個15—20分鐘看一看，真的會幫助很大！

最後最後，給那些想申請技術移民的你們，請千萬記得，可以的話，就同時間把189和190的EOI一起遞出吧，至於為什麼，敬請期待下回分曉。

在這裡我會分享一些雲爸常常上的網站跟論壇，希望對你們有所幫助，不過這些東西都是僅供參考，因為每個人的狀況都不一樣喔！

👉🏻澳洲移民局官方邀請數據公布網址
https://immi.homeaffairs.gov.au/visas/working-in-australia/skillselect/invitation-rounds

👉🏻澳洲移民局官方簽證處理時間一覽表
https://immi.homeaffairs.gov.au/visas/getting-a-visa/visa-processing-times/global-visa-processing-times

👉🏻澳洲移民局官方FOI(Freedom of Information)公佈網址
https://www.homeaffairs.gov.au/access-and-accountability/freedom-of-information/disclosure-logs

👉🏻Iscah移民代辦新聞分享網址（雲爸從這裡學了很多移民資訊）
http://www.iscah.com/news-page/

👉🏻Newstar紐星達移民代辦新聞分享網址（如果你們想看中文版的移民資訊可以看這個）
https://www.newstarsec.com/newscenter

👉🏻Expat Forum 移民相關論壇網址（裡面很多大神級的網民，不過還是那一句，僅供參考）
https://www.expatforum.com/expats/australia-expat-forum-expats-living-australia/

👉🏻MyImmiTracker移民追蹤數據網址（數據都是申請者提供的，預估佔了總移民數量的不到10%，所以也是僅供參考）
https://myimmitracker.com/en/au/trackers

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🔈預告下集 《 189簽證跟190簽證"一起"申請的重要性》

❤還請大家繼續多多支持我們澳洲小雲朵 Celestine，讓我們更有動力把移民澳洲的記事生出來，也別忘記多多支持我們家療育的雲雲日常唷，謝謝你們！

❤ 澳洲小雲朵 Celestine的IG雙手奉上 , 歡迎參觀
https://www.instagram.com/celestine.maylovearoundyou/

花博絮語：從不請專業口譯到官網文宣菜英文——臺中宣言

花博又「花現」問題！
（「花現GNP」是花博宣傳口號 XD）

談談臺中市府官網宣傳《臺中宣言》的英文標題，見圖。

原版：累贅、不像樣的的台式菜英文：

《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People

設法順著原標題想表達的意思改成及格的英文：

The Taichung Declaration has redefined the pursuit of GNP growth in a new proposal of Green, Nature, and People

英文雖然對了，但仍累贅，沒有標題的樣子。

再改，使其精簡易懂，有標題樣：

The Taichung Declaration redefines GNP as Green, Nature, and People

最後這標題比較令人滿意，簡明、有重點、有哏。

* 重點明確：臺中宣言提出GNP新定義
* 明示GNP所代表的新名，但細節賣關子
* 藉此吸引讀者閱讀內文一探究竟

原標題在文法、寫作上的問題：

* 英文不存在中文新式書名號《……》

* 亂用動詞原形raise，不合文法

* 「GNP Promote」是啥？看似想表達「GNP提升」、「提升GNP」？就算視爲一個方案名，這也是糟糕的台式英文，正如Taiwan(,) Touch Your Heart 給人的感覺，無法端上國際。
問題出在把不合文法的動詞原形 promote、touch 一路用到底，不管意思如何，這顯示英語尚在牙牙學語階段，尚無動詞變化的意識和能力。

爲何 GNP Promote 是菜英文？進一步佐證：

請上 Google 搜索 "GNP Promote" （記得加英文引號），出現百餘條結果，清一色與「臺中宣言」有關，細查其實皆出自同一則臺中政府官方英文新聞文章，即本文探討的文章標題。難道「提升GNP」這概念在全人類有英語記錄的歷史中，是臺中市府首推？當然不！更合理的推論是：

一、像樣的英文不是這樣寫。
二、不像樣的這個英文表達，在全宇宙為臺中市府獨創。

這篇文宣，判斷又是不重視翻譯專業的結果。其實，有待批評的英文書寫問題還多著，有興趣的讀者不妨一讀，親自感受一下。

正如不久前逢甲大學一位外國英語教授針對「英語列爲第二官方語言」的計畫投書賴院長，批評這做法是緣木求魚，我也認爲台灣政府各層級應該檢討是否真已準備好，有能力拿出像樣的對內、對外的英語書寫。答案好像不證自明。

以下轉錄臺中官網全文，先是介紹何謂臺中宣言，後是臺中宣言英文版。（連結見留言）

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《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People

Issued by Information Bureau Date:2018-04-19

Taichung will conduct World Flora Expo in November. Green productivity proposed by the City Government was based on the Flora Expo addressed concepts of Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability.「Taichung Declaration」is aiming for inviting 100 cities to sign up. Taichung City Mayor, Chia-lung Lin has signed the declaration with Changwon City Mayor, Ahn Sang-soo tonight at Masan Baseball Stadium in South Korea, he also kicked off the starting game for the Taiwanese baseball pitcher, Weichung Wang, who is working currently in South Korea. It’s very meaningful to have Changwon City as the first city to sign up to the Taichung Declaration.

The theme of 2018 Taichung World Flora Expo is「Exploring GNP」 which change the old meaning of GNP as Gross National Product. Redefined GNP now means Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability for pursuing green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity and embrace the nature in addition to pursuing the technological development. to make people’s living better. We wish to promote and raise the awareness of enhanced collaborations between international societies because this is the only way to connect people to help each other for sharing the goodness and prosperity for the world. (4/11*11)*Information Bureau.

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Taichung Declaration：

《Taichung Declaration》
A New Proposal for GNP

Have you ever thought about that, sound of blooming, could be heard?

Modern people are busy in earning their livings when they are pursuing the development of economics and technologies. They’ve been too busy to see things through so they’ve forgotten to listen to the hearts, realize the nature how close they are relying on the environment.

In 2018, let’s find out the balance for ourselves, let’s listen to the whispers of the nature, let’s listen to the happy sounds of the blooming, we can feel the the value of life and how great to be alive. After all, the meaning of life is to make the world better.

2018 Taichung World Flora Expo will raise a new proposal for GNP. GNP has it’s own life and means Green, Nature and People so it is no more a neutral number of Gross National Product. GNP stands for green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity to make people’s living better.

It’s the time to move forwards, it’s the time to look back to the past. When we move forwards to develop the smart technologies in the future, we should remember to turn to embrace the nature again to facilitate the ecological eternity. We believe the prosperity and environmental protection can exist concurrently while the technologies can live with the nature.

Green Productivity

City in green and green in the city. The economical growth traded off by the environment will no more last as we know quite well how to play the role as one of the members in the global village. By applying green technologies, reducing energy consumption and create the shared resources to construct a sustainable city with green production and green economics as the backbone.

Nature Sustainability

The mountain geography left from the ice age and the recent wetland scenes formed by the waves and tides are all the low polluted ecological environment and diverse biological systems we would like to sustain. We will never pay the price of nature to pursue the technological prosperity again. We will rebuild the tight connections between people and nature to find back the harmony and balance between people and nature.

People with Green-ability

We are anticipating people will develop their green concepts and capabilities. Such trivial things as personal thought, diet, living and action or big scope as urban construction and future development, all of them will become the group energy of Green to contribute to the international society. So-called green concepts is to implement the actions, including respect the varieties and embrace diversity. No matter in the aspects of culture, race, politics, education or religion, we will maintain the old traditions and develop the innovations to share a better future with everyone. The aesthetics of living is to live with varieties and grow with the compatibilities.

We believe,
The perfect balance among production, ecology and living can be obtained.
Listen to the nature, connect with the society and link to the world.
Collaborate and facilitate the development of international non-government organizations.
Create the new model of urban management.
Because we connect with each other,
We will share the achievements and good results.

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